Naios the Lancer of Divine light

Name:Naios
Race:Nobody(Element Lightning,Sub-element Light)
Appearance:He has a stature of 5'8 with an appearance of a teenager,He often hides his short blonde hair under his hood,so much that it doesn't even reveal his eyes...He wears the standard black colored organization cloak...He wields a a black and white two tone spear that emanate a faint glow with a nobody insignia..His ability is that he can summon forth spears of light which pierce through the target as fast as how light travels...upon impact the spear impales a deep portion of the area inflicted which then breaks the spear into smaller fragments which as well pierce through the target..some even got lodged into them...those shards have a paralyzing property,and also there is a chance of amnesia on the affected area...ex:If it were to be lodged within the arm,the arms functions could be completely forgotten and rendered useless...
Personality:He is quite brash and wants to be better than everyone else...He's cocky and loves a good challenge...And determined to surpass his other half...He isn't really good at making friends since never really talks to anyone...
History:When he was made,he wandered around the city,he had nothing more to do but beat around the heartless...Then amongst the city he found a castle which was pretty empty so he made himself at home in it...
Situation:Hanging around in the world that never was...

Kar i'd concentrait on your original character and your brothers nobody for now, this does look like a good character but it wont be approved untill we have a few more members and we have a few good role plays on the go. K?

Yeah, I'd agree with Akuma, just concentrate on your main and his brother's nobody for now.
Also, you would have to change this character about when the time comes to being approved as no one will be an Organizaton Member when they start out. They have to apply for that.

M'kay...